I'm going to try to sound like I know what I'm doing here. Cool song, probably missing the bassline because these speakers have terrible bass response. Could've 30 seconds shorter probably and maybe 5-10 BPMs faster to give a more jumpy feel also. Last thing to say is that it probably could've used an actual melody, instead of just the oscillating pads you have now. Good song though, I liked it.
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